First off, great job. You looked into each school’s mental health approach, who the decision makers are, and where the Biko Method might fit in. That kind of insight is useful in the real world. You did really well at looking into staff structures, internal vs external resources, and where there might be an opening for Biko Method. That’s exactly the kind of thinking that creates successful outcomes. Your recommendations made sense. I liked that you didn’t go straight for the top programs. You understood that sometimes you start where the door is already cracked open. That kind of strategic thinking will serve you well no matter what field you go into. You got the method, which helped with the delivery of your paper. The way you talked about trauma informed care and what’s missing from traditional approaches showed that you understood what sets the Biko Method apart. Small areas of improvement for the future. There were quite a few grammar and sentence structure issues that made it a little hard to follow in parts. It doesn’t take away from the quality of your thinking, but just know, clean writing builds trust. Especially in business. Go a little deeper with messaging. You talked about who to reach out to, which is great, but I would’ve loved to see how. Even just a few lines of sample messaging would’ve elevated the strategy. Be careful with assumptions. Some of the salary data came off a little strong, as if a low salary automatically means low investment. Just something to be mindful of. Overall solid and strong project.